[quote][size=2][color=#999999]草斋风凉 发表于 2014-1-18 09:17[/color] [url=forum.php?mod=redirect&goto=findpost&pid=91335&ptid=14914]static/image/common/back.gif[/url][/size] 好游兴!好景色!结句太直白了,与前三句风格不一了![/quote] 谢谢草斋风凉先生赐教,呵呵呵俺是想谐趣些,就白话入诗了,也是俺水平有限,呵呵问好! |
[quote][size=2][color=#999999]江左老叟 发表于 2014-1-17 12:22[/color] [url=forum.php?mod=redirect&goto=findpost&pid=91125&ptid=14914]static/image/common/back.gif[/url][/size] 图文并茂,真是一顿好享受! 问红豆兄好![/quote] 谢谢先生雅赏,问好! |
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