He and she 义夫义 Yifuyi He asked her carefully, "since we can't be husband and wife in this life, what shall we do?" "Let's be confidants!" She said to him. He said, "no, I can't bear that concern and missing. No one can be a lifelong confidant." "Let's be lovers!" She said to him.He said: "no, because you are a kind, gentle and virtuous woman. Although our feelings are not favored by the sun, such ambiguous words are a kind of stain on us." "Let's be brothers and sisters!" She said to him. He said: "no, the love between us has already gone beyond the kind of family affection between brothers and sisters. Will a brother look at his sister with that kind of tender love? I won't be such a brother." "Let's be friends. I can only give you this." She said to him. He said: "no, in my heart, you have long been my lover in the same boat in my life and become a friend. From then on, I can't face you and your other half, nor can I imagine that when you are with your other half in the future... I can't resist not thinking of you when I sleep with my other half in the same bed." "Well, we'd better separate forever and be enemies who don't communicate with each other!" He said to her:"Since we can't change our destiny, this life is doomed not to be happy with each other for a lifetime. Instead of worrying and suffering about each other, hating away from each other's sight, we can't find each other forever, and never meet in this life. This may be the best relief." She stunned and he cried. No one can imagine that what they can give each other in the end is such an outcome. However, they all know that only such a choice can keep each other's kindness and purity, and will no longer hurt moreh. 义老师:这是翻译的英文吗? |
本帖最后由 义夫义 于 2020-1-22 02:53 编辑 鹿城飞侠 发表于 2020-1-14 21:22 鹿城飞侠老师:您好! 首先,祝您新年吉祥笔健,硕果累累! 非常感谢老师的鉴评!老师能看到,并领会到拙作《他与她》背后的内涵,真是独具慧眼哦。敬佩敬佩! 这世界上所有作品,无论是长篇大作名著,还是短小作品,其都是来源于生活。有句俗话说:“这戏里有,这世上就有。” 我这篇拙作《他与她》也不列外,其素材也是来源于生活。 他与她,在小学一年级,因同在一个班,由此开始相识。而且,从小学到六年级毕业,他与她一直是同桌。 中学六年,他与她一直是同班同窗同学。这12年的同学期间,他与她,彼此相处的很好。双方互相帮助,学习成绩都很好。都是班上的学习尖子生。 他与她,在略懂世事后,彼此心心相映,双方都把对方,置于心里一个重要的位置。可以这样说:一个非她不娶,一个非他不嫁。他与她,都想此生永远在一起。 然而,这世界往往有很多事都是不尽人意的。“十年文革”这场浩劫,使他的家庭遭到巨变,他的父亲,一位南下的老干部,被文革中的动乱分子暗杀了,他作为家中的长子,不得不过早地走进社会打工挣钱,担负起抚养家里人的重任。 她,因父亲也是一个官场上人,她高中毕业下放农村两年后,她父亲动用社会关系,将她推荐进了大学。她大学毕业后,正逢“改革开放”,她考上官费留学美国。她留学生毕业后,取得了绿卡,便留在美国了。 他,高中毕业后下放农村,因他失去了父亲,要全力扶养弟妹,再加上没有了靠山以及社会背景,在农村干了很久很久…… 她,因是理科留美学生,学的专业是当时最先进的“卫星遥控”,故美国佬主动向她伸出“橄榄技”,给她发了绿卡,将她留任居住在美国工作。 她当年在出国留学前,曾主动约会他,向他提出,等她学业完成后回国,要他娶她为妻。 他认识到彼此家庭各方面的巨大差距,(也许是年青气盛,另外还有自卑的心理在作祟)他在对她祝福的同时,也明确拒绝了她。 她,哭着走了…… 他,强忍着内心的巨大悲痛,对她以后的来信,一概不回……从此,他与她,断了联系,再也没有见过面。 |
谢谢。{:1_222:} |
我就在水一方 发表于 2021-12-13 08:12 感谢一方老师的鉴评,遥祝您虎年吉祥快乐!{:1_222:} |
义夫义 发表于 2021-11-23 23:53 义老师,新年好!{:1_222:} 您感客气了,非常感谢您对创作分享。{:1_207:} |
义夫义 发表于 2022-2-7 23:23 谦虚 |
我就在水一方 发表于 2021-12-13 18:39 惭愧,所知英文甚少。新年好!{:1_222:} |
老师这篇短小说,写的非常精彩,为我们塑造了一种别样的爱,令人感动。{:1_222:} |
义夫义 发表于 2021-12-20 00:04 噢,守旧意义很多。{:1_222:} |
我就在水一方 发表于 2021-12-13 08:07 我并非是守旧哦,而是随着年龄越大,我的胆子越小喽。呵呵。{:1_226:} |
如果有人冤枉你,骂你,你不生气吗? |
义夫义 发表于 2021-12-13 03:17 老师是心胸宽阔的人,宰相肚里能撑船。我可不行哟,如果有逆耳的话,我会生气的哦。 |
义夫义 发表于 2021-12-13 03:17 过去初心留在心底,好事,贞,不滥情应该是很好呀。品行好嘛。{:1_214:} |
义夫义 发表于 2021-11-23 23:53 你也是那个年代出生人,思想都很守旧哟。{:1_214:} |
我就在水一方 发表于 2021-10-11 12:04 是吗,呵呵,就是说我也没有关系哦。良药苦口利于病,忠言逆耳利于行嘛。{:1_211:} |
我就在水一方 发表于 2021-11-18 12:20 感谢一方老师鉴评留言鼓励,受教受教。问好!{:1_222:} |
每个人都有一段爱情故事,欣赏老师文章{:1_207:}{:1_207:}。 |
义夫义 发表于 2021-11-1 22:12 这话是谁说的呢? |
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