·十余年后重填《醉太平·巴山远镇纪游》八首（昔游樊哙镇得来）

江南达者

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[size=14px]·十余年后重填《醉太平·巴山远镇纪游》八首（昔游樊哙镇得来）[/size]
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[size=14px]所循原则——[/size]
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[size=14px]1、矫正明显错误而力保原始朴拙野趣。[/size]
[size=14px]2、升华旧稿相对佳处，包括意蕴与炼字。[/size]
[size=14px]3、跳出实纪其游之思维框架，加强基本人生意态之描述。[/size]
[size=14px]4、一般以得能“过格律机”验证为准。但古今用字差异本身这因素亦必须考虑到。如“问仙源哪边？”之“哪”。[/size]
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[size=14px]附：“醉太平”词牌在“钦定词谱”中收录刘过、辛弃疾、无名氏三体。此为第一体。[/size]
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[size=14px]醉太平八首·巴山远镇纪游[/size]
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[size=14px]江南达者 童山雷[/size]
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[size=14px]一[/size]
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[size=14px]心仪昔年，[/size]
[size=14px]情怀昨天。[/size]
[size=14px]今朝了愿何难，[/size]
[size=14px]喜秦巴路宽。[/size]
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[size=14px]车行险山，[/size]
[size=14px]船停浅滩。[/size]
[size=14px]山重水复云环，[/size]
[size=14px]问仙源哪边？[/size]
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[size=14px]二[/size]
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[size=14px]波摇白沙，[/size]
[size=14px]烟笼碧霞。[/size]
[size=14px]小河沿岸人家，[/size]
[size=14px]澹然真可夸。[/size]
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[size=14px]神怡意佳，[/size]
[size=14px]风轻柳斜。[/size]
[size=14px]疏篱侧畔黄花，[/size]
[size=14px]暗香长袭咱。[/size]
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[size=14px]三[/size]
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[size=14px]河楼绝伦，[/size]
[size=14px]簧床颇真。[/size]
[size=14px]起居里外三新，[/size]
[size=14px]店家诚笃人。[/size]
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[size=14px]招呼亦勤，[/size]
[size=14px]羹蔬足飧。[/size]
[size=14px]一朝如进家门，[/size]
[size=14px]乃忘飘泊身。[/size]
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[size=14px]四[/size]
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[size=14px]东家女娘，[/size]
[size=14px]微施淡妆。[/size]
[size=14px]悉心侍奉高堂，[/size]
[size=14px]德行宜表彰。[/size]
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[size=14px]朋家小郎，[/size]
[size=14px]长观那厢。[/size]
[size=14px]私心竟羡鸳鸯，[/size]
[size=14px]则童言也狂。[/size]
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[size=14px]五[/size]
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[size=14px]乡场已颓，[/size]
[size=14px]河街久摧。[/size]
[size=14px]流行时尚仍追，[/size]
[size=14px]碟声嘹若雷。[/size]
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[size=14px]灰蓝丑闺，[/size]
[size=14px]粉红美眉。[/size]
[size=14px]土洋同缀边陲，[/size]
[size=14px]恐欢中有悲。[/size]
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[size=14px]六[/size]
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[size=14px]朋侪漫游，[/size]
[size=14px]专寻野丘。[/size]
[size=14px]白云虽惹清愁，[/size]
[size=14px]证吾身自由。[/size]
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[size=14px]钻营可羞，[/size]
[size=14px]投机或忧。[/size]
[size=14px]懒将未雨绸缪，[/size]
[size=14px]醉晴岚老秋。[/size]
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[size=14px]溪山影间，[/size]
[size=14px]浮生乐园。[/size]
[size=14px]栉风沐雨悠然，[/size]
[size=14px]纵长歌啸天。[/size]
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[size=14px]平河放船，[/size]
[size=14px]斜滩听泉。[/size]
[size=14px]涧幽松冷云寒，[/size]
[size=14px]任心宽意闲。[/size]
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[size=14px]八[/size]
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[size=14px]心矜达称，[/size]
[size=14px]襟怀自澄。[/size]
[size=14px]毕生潇洒无争，[/size]
[size=14px]小窗望月明。[/size]
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[size=14px]随常以行，[/size]
[size=14px]兼观远程。[/size]
[size=14px]才言胸臆清泠，[/size]
[size=14px]怎豪情又萌。[/size]
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[size=14px]随附当年游事所留照片并画作——[/size]
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[size=14px]1、百里峡中……（1997年夏）[/size]
[size=14px]2、樊哙（事见《画中游》正记 150 ）[/size]
[size=14px]3、清夏夕凉（事见《画中游》正记 582 ）[/size]
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[size=14px]·精研艺术，细品人生·[/size]
[size=14px]·见悖于当世，遂求诸永恒·[/size]
[size=14px]·人生甚难者：尽历尘世辛苦、洞悉存世悲凉之后，依旧能够兴致勃勃且是诗意地对待生活·[/size]
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